Overall, I like it it... although it took a bit to see what it was. 

first signature i have done since i left eclipse



im still rusty but eh its a start

2. The borders of the pictures looks a bit rough compared to the text... They don't fuse together with the background and therefore come to the fore, which is not necessary in opinion because it interferes with the harmony of the picture as a whole

BT: Thanks BT my teacher liked that as well 

me: 1. The border is like that cause I had to make this in publisher so there are screenshots which I cut out in paint So that's just because of me rushing stuff.
2. I don't really know what you me with this one me, do you mean the pictures are cut out rough or the black and white squares look rough
3. The logo is meant to be big since it looks so good
Also, swapping the heads around may be a good idea, but I’ve handed it in for marking, if I get I need to edit it for some extra marks I’ll try it
Thanks for the comments people 

Awesomeness, Moo!

Three small things (but beware, I am a graphics noob )

1. The border looks a bit messed up in the second picture
2. The changeovers from the texts to the background are really smoth while the ones from the pictures to the background are rather... rough. Fitting if you want to highlight the content of the picture but in this case I would make it a bit more... flowing.
3. The signature in the second one looks a bit too large compared to the other pictures because it is not that important, right? On top of that, I would switch the pictures of the heads. It might look better if there is a constant change of black and white. (black head - white head - black signature)

Anyway: it looks great!

It looks good Moo, I like the white on black/black on white designing.

wewt! Glad you like it bro.

I've updated this with a new "Productions" log (Which was made by reb and is amazing) and changed a picture slightly, I'll repost this when I get a change

I made this for some course work, it's meant to be and advert for the back of a magazine.


So what does everyone think?